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Mia, the fledgling Slutpire, unleashes her new-found sense of self-assurance and limitless sexual power on an unsuspecting world in what is just the beginning of an orgy of swelling breasts, shifting bodies and an eternity of unending arousal.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.83
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.83
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Youre killing me, smalls!
rtpoe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please continue! Not only with the Tale of Mia, but how about some other stories in the Slutpire world?
Viddaric
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
...it stops there?
WHERE'S THE REST, MAN? WHERE'S THE REST!?
Lilian
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I bow down humbly in the presence of such geratnses.
Viddaric
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You nailed it on this one. I'm a 4chan /d/viant, and this appeals to me very strongly. I personally recommend heading over there and telling them about this, because this is some of the best literotica I've ever seen. Anyway, Keep up the good work. You are planning to continue this series, right? Porn with plot is one of my things, and there are still some unanswered questions in this story, and it still has plenty of potential.
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Man, your story's got it all! I've enjoyed all 4 parts, so far. Is it too much to ask for lacation?
SMAP
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well done! This one certainly dove right into the action without wasting any time, which is hardly a bad thing; as a result, it feels a little on the short side, but given the series length overall that can easily be forgiven. Very well written and edited (no jarring errors or weird transitions, etc) and both sex scenes were hot as hell.
Hoping to see more in the future here, especially more of Jo.
Oh Sai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Welcome back from your hiatus! After you had posted Part 3 I was earnest in seeing a continuation of the series. Now, it has come true! Great story, love the sex scenes. Keep up the excellent work!
anon10929
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thank you so much for continuing this story, I can't wait to see the next chapter!
drmentat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great addition to one of my favorite stories on this website! This is what BE story telling is all about. Entertaining plot, good characters and lots of BE and sex. Please continue to add more chapters to this marvelous series.
KaZe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Been hoping for a continuation of this series for awhile now. I don't normally like futa but there's something about your writing that makes me appreciate it in this case. This new part is no exception; please keep it up!
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
truly Excellent!, great in every aspect format,descriptions,characters,writing , keep up the good work this is quickly becoming my favorite series on TOB
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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