John finds out that his girlfriend is a Were-breeder, cursed spend the night of the full moon as a pregnant woman. He also finds out that this is a sexually transmitted condition and also has to spend the night of the full moon as a pregnant woman.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.38
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.38
- Technical: 4.50
Trix
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I was sreouilsy at DefCon 5 until I saw this post.
Chea
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'd really enjoy reading more of this! It could do with a tad more BE, but that's just my opinion. Wow!
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good story. Usually I'm not one for male to female transformations, but you used it well!
rifraff
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
sorry i couldn't go higher than 5. GREAT work!!
☺
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The most notable thing I noticed was the awesome transformation description. Not much BE, but as for the transformation: keep it up! Very good imagery.
Developing the characters and the world some more would be a pretty good idea... I really liked this one.
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked it. Keep up the good work, maybe have it were John and Hunter learn how to fully control the changes ,-)
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An enjoyable story, Im not huge on preg, but the tg was enjoyable for me. Do write more. :)
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Always did enjoy the "werewoman" stories and caps and whatnot. I really enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to more! Well done!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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