TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Part 2 of Spiders. Scientists attempt to breed a species of tiny alien spiders in Cona's breasts. Stay tuned for Part 3.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.40
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 3.40
Maura
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
carol haney - I'm with you one the ladybug vs. sdeipr thing! It's a nice surprise in February when one comes crawling out from somewhere. Makes you realize how much you miss spring by that point.
bartman2589
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Looking forward to part 3, don't make us wait too long please, it sounds like it's going to really get interesting soon.
Very Free
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
OmniTrixie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Well-written, but disturbing. I think the third part is going to contain the first deaths.
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I've no idea whom are you as an artist, but this story interests me. What will happen to her, will you continue, & why are the spiders changing? Please write more eventually, I'd love to see the story continue.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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