Heather, a mousy little college student, gets some divine help in the dating arena. After undergoing a few confidence boosters, she goes on her first date. Sara and Nyomi are mostly absent (See if you can't spot Nyomi's cameo appearance), but they'll return in the next chapter. Sorry, no milk in this chapter, but ch3 is on the way.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.75
- Technical: 3.25
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Keep up the good work! Love a surprise MPG story.
zin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed the story overall, it was great, albeit there were a few errors, but they weren't anything disruptive to me as I read. I can't wait to see more.
Slack
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
"...and a full bosom coupled with a narrow waste"
I didn't waste my time with this story but it had its issues.
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed it, and the story seemed to flow a lot better! Great job!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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