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The Overflowing Bra

Sucker4Boobs
sonicbland@aol.com
Milk From Mother Mary, Part 7
Jason and Cindy finally meet Roger and Sheila when they, plus Mary, go away for a weekend in Grand Cayman. Let the five-way begin!
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Johncaleb
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

How fun!! Did I ever mention to you that my ehotrbr-in-law is a UK alum...and so are my 2 nieces, though one of them isn't quite finished up yet...one more semester. So UK blood runs in our family line.My husband, however, is a UF alum, so he was rooting for the Gators on Saturday; I, however, was rooting for UK to take the Gators down. I don't care for the Gators, though I did root for them for 4 years because I do love Tim Tebow.Maybe your wildcats will win next week. Hope so!Blessings,Patti

konser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

i wonder what will happen next. Cindy is OK what's the matter with her, she's not bad at all.

Kisame17
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

How do you find the words to describe sex in one paragraph? Also I hate Cindy, she's a total b****. I wonder what will happen next.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I have been following this story since chapter 1. Great so far, and hope it continues. I rather dislike Cindy however, but that's personal preference & I can't honestly explain why.

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