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What happens when a nice guy with a strange talent runs into too many women at once. Straight-up BE this time, and the usual fun that goes with it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.80
Lightfoot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked this story. It was a kind BE story. No weird stuff, no mean things, on one getting hurt. The characters were likable, the story was thought out, and the ending was appropriate. My only complaint is that the woman at the end isn't described very well visually.
G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This is a wonderful, original story. Love the concept and the fitting ending. This and "Right Sized" have been two big standouts at the Archive in the past months. Please continue in the genre. and don't forget the PREG!
HannahBE
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written, definitely deserves another instalment!
D
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good story arc, liked the character development, but I'd like to see more description of the growth, and you stopped at the best part.
belover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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