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Desperate to be noticed by the men of her village, Gerda goes to see a witch, who gives her a special potion. After drinking the potion, Gerda finds that it works all too well...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.80
BoobViking
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Simply put, one of the best BE stories I have read in a long time! Keep it up! - BoobViking
tsokei
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great work, there were only a few moments that were distracting. Would love to see more scenes and descriptions of the growth. Good pacing and style.
Beetlebomb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great great story.
I really enjoyed how you slowly introduced the story. You gave just enough information in the beginning that the readers were able to understand what was going on, but you didn't overdo it with the details.
When it came to the 'turn-on' scenes, they were simply great. You knew how to word everything very well and smoothly.
A near perfect story in my book. My only complaint would be that you left us wanting more! haha!
Looking forward to more of your work,
-Beetlebomb
Ramen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story, enjoyed it a lot! Gerda got a tad too big for my taste at the very end but other than that the BE was great. I'd love to see a sequel with either Gerda and Kaley or even with a different character going to see Carmelita.
Kisame17
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Is it possible for a sequel? This story is awesome. I loved every minute of it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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