In response to your comments I have repackaged the story in both .doc and .txt formats. I understand what a lot of people are saying about the plot being overused, but then the story has to be at least 6-7 years old in my possession, let alone how long it was on the usenet sites, so who knows Cheryl's bathtime adventures with the shower hose could have been inspiration for some of the newer stuff. Anyway for those who couldn't read it ... enjoy. This is a Classic BE tale.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Above Ground Swimming Pool�����
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Hello! How do you feel about young composers?!...
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just downloaded the file, but I'm puttin' up fives cause Lorleans gave Ones where Ones were not due.
Some Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Lorleans if you read overviews instead of just blinding voting 1's on stories you would've seen this is a) a repost of an awesome classic BE story and b) a repost in new formats for people who couldn't open the previous one.
This is by far one of my alltime favorite stories, easily in my top 5.
isengard
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A Nonny Mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
If you read the comments carefully, he's only posting a "golden oldie" from many years gone by. He didn't write the story in the first place. I imagine editing such an old piece would amount to sacriledge to most BE fans who read this story when it was new.
Lorleans
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Don't repost your stuff, without revising it man
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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