Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.90
- BE: 2.90
- Characters: 3.20
- Technical: 2.80
joce37
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed reading this - and I say that as one who is mostly disappointed by such stories. I too will greatly look forward to the sequel - many thanks.
fraggle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story. This has the potential to become a classic.
Please continue!!!
Duuude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Has dfinite possibilities! Please, continue!
Pookie
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Works for me; think its much better than the usual posts.
blaaaggghhhh!!!!!!
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Guess this one really polarizes the community. I liked it a lot.
Yeah yeah
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Awsome stuff
Please make more!
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Yep, it was terrible, but not much of a change from the usual crap.
wooooboobs!
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
I REALLY love this story! seriously i cant wait to read the next one. It does need a proof reader but hey, it's not like you're publishing it right? anyways keep it up i love the idea.
Culex
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
No BE besides some implied at the start and end; this story is about an involuntary body switch between an average guy and a lactating woman. Dialog is stilted and wooden, and the motivations are lackluster at best.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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