The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A Terrible Change
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed reading this - and I say that as one who is mostly disappointed by such stories. I too will greatly look forward to the sequel - many thanks.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent story. This has the potential to become a classic.

Please continue!!!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Has dfinite possibilities! Please, continue!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Works for me; think its much better than the usual posts.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Guess this one really polarizes the community. I liked it a lot.

Yeah yeah
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Awsome stuff

Please make more!

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Yep, it was terrible, but not much of a change from the usual crap.

Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 1

I REALLY love this story! seriously i cant wait to read the next one. It does need a proof reader but hey, it's not like you're publishing it right? anyways keep it up i love the idea.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Needs a proof-reader.

Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

No BE besides some implied at the start and end; this story is about an involuntary body switch between an average guy and a lactating woman. Dialog is stilted and wooden, and the motivations are lackluster at best.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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