The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

pakled
pakled05@hotmail.com
Hip Gnosis
just a quicky. gonna lose access to this place for a couple months, so I'd better post quickly...;)
Some BE, but not central to the story. Still, might be fun. Enjoy.
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 Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Excellent job, mate.  Sorry to hear that you're losing access.  Look forward to future stories!
 anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
hope you can continue it, or write something else!
 Andy
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
A fun, cute little story.  Loved the ending.
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