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Part one of a new series. Melanie was once an ordinary girl. Now her life is a paradise of sex, lactation, and ever growing tits. A tale told to set the stage.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.40
tsokei
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
More narrative than BE focused.
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A very interesting start, could stand alone..but please don't let it.
ineligible:
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really love your writing style and after reading Honey and Lemon, I'm wondering, where's part two?! Upload it if you can :)
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I thought the account of her tit growth could have been elaborated a bit more. But maybe that's in an upcoming episode?
Vlad
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good stuff so far. Looking forward to more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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