pakled05@hotmail.com
A sequel to an old submission of mine, 'Dr. Gonzaga'. What happens when modern science comes in contact with the lusty Victorian extract that causes everything good to expand...;)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.57
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.43
Damian
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
This is both street smart and inelilegtnt.
eekee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Challenges the original for its place in my favourites. ;)
Zeppelin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this story. My only comment could be that I wish that the sex scenes were a bit more descriptive. Other than that it was very enjoyable and the characters were great. Looking forward to more in the future.
howardbeatman
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It was strange seeing 'Vulcan' words from the STAR TREK episode "Amok Time" in a porno.
Yummm
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the original, as well as this one.
Keep up the good writing.
elvis intnteruptus
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I remember the original very fondly. Nice to see a sequel.
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice, easy read and well written. A few bits of humour too which I liked.
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