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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
xxxecil@hotmail.com
Body-Shifter's Universe: C.L.A.I.R.E. Part 3
(The Complete Archive! Chapters 1 & 2, plus the new third chapter!)
   I have a plan, a plan to quench the seething lust that burns in my blood, and yet retain my freedom from a life as an alien sperm-stud. There are more Shifters than ever, and their nymphomaniacal urges will drive them to turn the tables on those that would curtail their erotic rampage. Can one man retain his sanity against a legion of luscious, shape-shifting beauties determined to get their chance at my cock? (Take a wild guess!)
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BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

What I love about XXXecil is his ability to keep cranking up the overall sexual insanity of a story until you start wondering how he's going to stop this runaway train.. only to finally figure out not only a way that works, but a way that is awesome for the main character. Congrats on landing this crazy plane on an island that I would love to be stranded on. Definite 5 stars.

TheSaw
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

i loved the entirely original plot of this story, and moreover, just about everything you write. looking forward to more.

MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I love the body Shifter's universe, and overall I like this story. But where was the climax?

Rod
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great ending. What man could resist?

elvis interuptus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love the way you made it clear about how dedicated the shifters are to their life's work.

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