I found your site years ago and I read in from time to time (especially to practice my English :o) ). So I decided to participate in writing a little. This is my first story in English (I'm from Russia). If anyone enjoy, others would be translate soon.
This story is about a girl in our office. How we met, and what happened else… Consider big overdeveloped breasts and constant investigation process. For those who enjoy to look and to take part in big breast action.
To contact me: ahsel@mail.ru
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 3.00
Ken
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I very much agree, Tracy Chu's mouth is way too big and always shows her gum!Roxanne Tong is a lot beettr, deserved to be place at least among Top3!Carat Cheung looks not bad indeed but a bit not too "decent" type.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
Not much breast _expansion_. But I like big boob stories, and I liked this one. Nice to read something without weird science or magic, juat a "Big Boob love story".
I fully understand that the author is not a native English speaker, so I have to give him credit for doing a good job with this story. But there are hundreds of discrepancies and issues, mainly having to do with the difference between his native language and English. These made it difficult to understand. For instance, when they arrived at some public place, they "took off their clothes". Well, I think the author really meant took off their coats, or outer garments.
wi
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
btb
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I agree, the first "I want to mary you" was quite early, but great story.
V
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Nice english. The love was too quick for me, but I liked the story.
Hope you write more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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