The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ms. Jones The Complete Series
This story is about a bizarre health class and the consequences of it. 
Average Scores:

Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

This set of stories would benefit greatly from some good proofreading before being published. Otherwise a great set of stories. Keep up the good work.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

good stories

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

Once you get past the abundant and fixable spelling errors, the story was interesting. The author should make the "processes" longer and more detailed, because often the reader is left wondering, "Wait--What just happened?"

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I actually really enjoyed this story. I wish all the expansions were a bit more detailed, but I'm just picky.

Keep it up!!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

This is a decent breast expansion and rapid pregnancy story. Even though I found the story flowed a little less than smoothly, and slightly lacking in details, it was still and enjoyable read.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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