"Me, Raz, and CeeCee are gunna find out just how much cum Dee's really got in him. Something tells me we're going to need it all to face down my baby sister. And then we're going to fuck his cum into you, one nanogasm at a time, no matter how much of Nyx we gotta stuff up our snatches or how much Ursula-pussy we gotta eat. It's the only logical solution, don't you think?"
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.17
- BE: 3.17
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.33
The Anal Intruder
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Just desert your desserts.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This author's got a vivid imagination, and it's a great story, even though it's a bit tedious at times. Just that I saw almost no BE, hence the less than 5 ratings.
Pobblebonk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Once again, amazing. I'll be waiting with baited breath for part 6. Maybe Yves will finally get some sleep, though it doesn't look like SB is going to let that happen!
NinjaInTheNight
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
To say your work is great is an understatement. Even though I am usually not a fan of Jelly Girls, this story has not only kept me interested (heh) but also renewed my love of the written arts. I love how descriptive you are & how I have to really pay attention to keep up. I can't wait to see what happens.
IronHammer
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Mien gott in himmel! Who are you, where do you write your non-smut and how the hell can I get some of your published works??
ZeroAngel
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Once again, you deliver an amazing story that confuses my head on whether this is super hot pron or just a really great classic that wasn't written back in classic times. overall, it was a wonderful read, cant wait for the next (possibly last?)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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