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The Overflowing Bra

Nudas Veritas - Chapter 6
The Newcastle Center for BioTech Research is an unusual home for James but he finds himself settling in.  Things heat up a bit as he learns more about the mysterious Beth Hurly and has an unusual sexual encounter.

(I decided it was better to send this chapter off now, than let my readers keep waiting.  Enjoy.  You're comments are much appreciated!  Expect more fun!)  
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a good story, but I kinda wish a bit more happened than just oral sex. Also, it was too short, hurry up with the next part! I can't wait to read more

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stuff. The only slightly wierd thing is how the male protagonist seems to be how well he is taking this forced imprisonment (albeit a very confortable one).
Gave 3 for overall enjoyment only because it was just a little too short. We need more! :)


Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Just as good as the first chapters, if not better. I hope the others are just like this one too.

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