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From the semi-warped mind of SkeetSkeet: Candice suddenly finds herself held hostage in a plot to extort $250,000 from a lawyer. As the kidnappers grow impatient, so grows poor Candice. Enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 2.67
- Technical: 4.33
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent work- glad to see you back with stories. Really love this line of writing.
fahzbehn
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well written. Good grammer. Nice plot. Great twist ending. Can't wait to read more.
jimms
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I've always enjoyed your stories very much and have read each of them. I also like that the premise and twists are (or atleast feel) original. As i said in the SAW BE review, I'm a Ass Growth kinda guy so, and you did a great job in SAWII, so bring it on again lol (but i would never deduct points because of that).
I thought the characters were fairly well defined, but, despite the ending I still wish she had enjoyed her growth more towards the end.
Definetly keep up the good work man
JoeX
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Great writing, good story, and BE, not bad for a short story.
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Short atory, entertaining, but the word at the end best describes it: implausible. It might be a bit longer, with more SEX, SEX, SEX. But no more bondage (eew, duct tape). Is this what HELOCs are for? :-> BTW, it's discreet, not discrete.
Chase
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
You're a good writer...my only comment is that no one in this story seemed to be enjoying themselves very much.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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