The scarlet girl marveled at him, perfect breasts heaving. "You smell wonderful, Master; so angry." Batwings the color of blood and smoke luxuriated in the air of the living room. "I love it." Narrow rivulets of red nectar trickled from her sex to run down her inner thighs. "You won't regret coming back to me. I'm so much stronger for you now." She reached out to him, fingers flexing. "I'm ready."
Dee advanced into the radius of her wingspan. "You're finished."
"Oh, Master," she gasped, agape with delight, before her eyes narrowed and her lips twisted into a thin, crooked grin. Her batwings snapped ready, their tiny twins above her ears fanning up and back until she looked like a helmeted Valkyrie who had fell to Hell. "Bring it."
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Fake_Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Is this story ever going to be continued?
Reallyu, I hope so!
Choco_cow
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
*sighs* see, I have dreams, where I can wrie like this. Unlike a lot of the stories on here, I actually care about its characters, seeing them not as simply a name and a body to transform, but as well rounded people.
Also, I'm pretty sure Dee's 'charism' can be transferred via internet.
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Practically perfect prose. I can only ask for BE, but you have your niche.
Sapphite
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Simply riveting. I loved this story. Not terribly arousing, but this isn't really my fetish. Despite that I could not stop reading. I eagerly await the rest of the chapters. Please keep up the good work!
TerribleTed
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
quite literate, well written, and very enjoyable. I honestly do not have enough room to express my appreciation for this story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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