The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

TJ Robinson
robbi3759@yahoo.com
Big Beautiful Betty
A blond hair fitness instructor out on a Sunday drive in the country,makes a mistake of her life stopping to fill up her gas tank. 
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 hot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
hot story!
 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 2 
The story was good, but the grammar...not so good. I wouldn't mind a sequel, though.
 Alex
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Good start man
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