The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

TJ Robinson
Big Beautiful Betty
A blond hair fitness instructor out on a Sunday drive in the country,makes a mistake of her life stopping to fill up her gas tank. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
hot story!
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 2

The story was good, but the grammar...not so good. I wouldn't mind a sequel, though.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good start man

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