"We're just getting started. I've got so much nanomek inside me right now I've got no idea what to do with it. I could grow fifty feet tall and carry you to the top of the Empire State Building and screw you stupid. I could fill this parking lot with a few hundred duplicates and line up to screw you stupid, but I doubt any of us could be that patient and we'd just pin you to the pavement with pussy and screw you stupid. Or with a little more food coloring we could first morph into every female character in those comic books hidden in your closet and then pin you down and screw you stu—Holy shit, this is really turning you on, isn't it?"
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.93
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 3.93
Party poker
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
I decided to help and sent a post to the social bookmarks. I hope to raise it in popularity!!...
create iphone apps
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The text is promising, will place the site to my favorites..!
mickey mouse clubhouse
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
52. "The road will be overcome by that person, who goes." I wish you never stopped and be creative - forever..!
uhaul coupons
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
It's straight to the point! You could not tell in other words! :D
organization
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Thanks for all the answers:) In fact, learned a lot of new information. Dut I just didn`t figure out what is what till the end!...
Anti Aging Products For Men
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Thanks for the article! I hope the author does not mind if I use it for my course work!...
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Kind of wandering away from BE, but a damn fine story all the same. Can't wait for part 3!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
SB.
It took me until about 3/4 through the story for me to realize it. It took me five minutes to recover from the laughter.
Keep it coming!
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Similar comments as my rating of your previous story. You are rendering a beautiful stage of conflict. I hope you take advantage of your work in parts 1 and 2. By the time part 2 ends, it feels epic!
plantman
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done, this is one of the few good stories to come along. Good grammar, story structure, characters and background descriptions. Even though the goo and jello thing isn't my fetish I was drawn in and had to read both installments. I think you should write some more. (I've always been fond of chocolate pudding......)
spaz
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
katheb
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
EL neato!
very nice thing you got goin there
Shiar
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You have inadvertently made me destroy several pairs of pants! Curse your characters vivacious Limeness! *chuckle* All jokes aside... Wow. I envy Dee about as much as his downstairs neighbor does. Truly wonderful story!
Oh, one hell of a cliffhanger there at the end too. Have you no pity upon us poor readers? *grin*
Fake_Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is the first story in a long time where I'm actually looking forwards to the next part.
Carry On! Please!
PUGnPLAY
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Even more arousing than Act 1!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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