…It started when the nubs of her sticky nipples pressed into his collar bone. There was resistance and pressure but her tits did not push him back. They just kept coming, a tide of flesh. Two circles of gooey, cool, soft sensation grew and then merged and then surged around his arms and up his neck and down his belly and…"Oops," the green girl said, eyes twinkling with mischief. "Talk about overkill. Better reel these babies in." With a sliding slurp the tide of tits receded. She drew some of her chest's substance into the rest of her body, darkening to a forest green. "There we go," she sighed. "Big enough to shame any porn star, small enough to fit through the door. Where was I?"
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 4.88
- Technical: 4.56
tstar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
one of the best storys i've read here.funny, intelligent. i haven't read it all (it's quite long) but i intend to.
mache
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Clearly the best goo girl fiction ever written. Hot as hell and creative too. Keep writing!
Straywolf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This has been a great story. The characters are interesting and have a depth to them. The world you've created is fun and the pace is not so quick as to seem rushed but not so slow as to drag on. All in all a very good read. I look forward to future installments.
Kick5233
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is a very interesting story with a lot of excellent transformation and plot twists. I love the characterizations and the idea in general. Please continue, this shit is hot!
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoy this story most for its content, not simply its ability to function as erotic fiction. I never thought I could enjoy goo girl material, but you may make a fan of me yet. I am writing this review after having read part 2, and I must say that part 2 has the enormous benefit of using already developed characters and an established plot line. Part 2 is an awesome read only because Part 1 is also well-constructed. Excellent writing!
Shiar
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well.... how do I put it in words? This is one of those few stories where the story drives you further and further, heedless of the time that passes as you slowly sink into the setting that has been created. The crazy scenarios depicted only make it more enjoyable and entertaining. *chuckle*
Unfortunately, I'm going to have to agree on the lack of BE description. It's definately there, but it most certainly does not have the limelight. Though, Galatea being what she is, and always having the option to change... I suppose that it could be viewed as a constant, implied theme.
Since I've typed so much, I'll try to keep this short. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, have read the second part, and am eagerly awaiting the third. You have a wonderful gift for storytelling (and imaginative sex scenes...), and I truly hope you continue on. You sir, get 2 thumbs way up on this one.
Yummm
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Admitably it's a little hard to follow who is speaking at one point, but other than that it was an excellent. Its always nice to see a good long story. Definably one of the best I've read.
PUGnPLAY
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
katheb
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very Nice work indeed .
i wasn't expecting this to be good but the more i read the more i like it ,great work.
Vic
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Wow. I went in to this story on a random read and really didn't expect much. To make it even better I had just been thinking "Man, when was the last time someone posted a good story?". My prayers are answered. You have written some amazing characters and are already setting up for a great story. I love it. Please keep writing!
Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I agree with others' assessments, especially Animal's, about being very descriptive and vivid. I would've rather read more of the main story instead of the sidetrack to the high tech peeping tom at the end. Certainly we want to read more: "There's always room for more Jello!"
Ouroboros
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Goo Girls aren't my thing, but that has to be one the best stories I've read on the overflowingbra in a long time. Regarding the BE you certainty did not have much description of the actual process, but you did an excellent job varying and describing the various sizes of Galatea's assets. Here's to waiting for a sequel!
p.s. Bonus points for hitting my giantess fetish!
Animal
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well written, very impressed with the overall story. My only gripe is the lack of "process" on the BE, no real expansion scenes, nothing long drawn out, most of the growth happened in a sentence and then on they went with something else. Very descriptive story aside from that, made an extremely vivid mental picture for me, keep up the good work Oblimo.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Goo-girls aren't my thing, but that was very entertaining, in multiple ways.
Constructive criticism: It seems like Dee and Gal have too much insight into each other so early on.
V
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Perverted as hell but really well done. So I guess I should say: perverted as hell, *therefore* really well done.
The characters were exceedingly likable, and Galatea is an excellent name for her.
Quadhouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A very enjoyable reading.
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