The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Power 4 b
Discover the fate of James and the truth of how he gain his powers.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I realy like the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I hope to see more

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A damn good story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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