The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Lucky
unknown
Helpless 2
Against her will, a manipulative woman transforms into her submissive boyfriend's ultimate fantasy, a balloon girl.
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 Above Ground Pool
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Yeah, now it's clear !... And firstly I did not understand very much where there was the link with the title itself !!...
 Redog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Great second chapter and hope to see more.....
 Ice0wl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
The show must go on! Please tell me you're writing more?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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