The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steamy prequel to a BE story about a manipulative woman and her submissive boyfriend.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good stuff. I liked the way that you described the different sounds heard in the story. Don't see that much.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really hope to see the second part soon. This is the kind of story I've been scouring for lately and rarely coming up with anything, full of teasing and shifting of control.

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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