skeetskeetbe@yahoo.com
No death/gore, but lots of non-consensual BE in a Saw plot-like style. This is my first BE attempt so be nice. Send all feedback to skeetskeetBE@yahoo.com
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.56
- BE: 4.22
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.44
forcedlactationlover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
i particularly liked the non-consensual aspect of the story.
Kiroku
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great story, I can't wait to read mroe.
SM
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
good, but more story and description tween ch6 and epilogue would make it great
nurova
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
First time I've ever commented on anything but this story was absolutely great, I can't wait for more!
B E lover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very good. Nice concept and well executed. Keep up the good work.
theMAN
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I don't like lactation all the much, but even I loved this story! Maybe the next part will not be so milky? Or maybe have some ass expansion too? Anyway keep it up, can't wait for the next installment!
Jimmy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
One of the few stories I feel compelled to comment on! This story was great! It was a fresh concept and I loved how you used such a terrible (but enjoyable to us lol) scenario.
I thought the whole story, from begining to end, was great.
Other than my personally preference of some butt growth now and again, it was great and I wouldn't hold any points against you because it didn't have something I rather (hint hint though lol).
I would love to see another installment, but after seeing the quality of this, take your time, because if you can think up something just as enjoyable as this, it'll be well worth the read. :)
trevor
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very good. Bring on the sequel!
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