The continuing saga of Andy and Amanda.
Amanda is getting a better hang of magic, while Andy is just trying to adjust. Meanwhile, strange things are afoot in Nebraska. Oh, and IHOP was never so much fun.
Input is welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.36
- BE: 3.73
- Characters: 4.45
- Technical: 4.09
yuck
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
cow vomit is better than this "story".
Ravenlord
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
very good read. its an exilent few chapters that i hope to read more of. please write more soon
KaZe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Most excellent my friend! A fine sequel to your initial story. One of the best reads I've had here in a while. :)
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A very good and somewhat unexpected sequel to another great story... and it looks like there'll be more in the future. Can't wait to see another part!
Annon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Some little spelling and grammar niggles here and there, but the story itself is top notch. Keep up the good work; you have an excellent first two chapters to this story, and I look forward to future additions to this already excellent story line.
Vlad
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I cant wait for another part. Keep up the great work
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the sequel. Its getting very interesting. Keep it up!
Pillager
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it. The bigger, the better. I look forward to the continuing tales.
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Cute story; engaging protagonists, with their sexual interests and believable naive attitudes. You did a superb job at painting the antagonist with a downright evil stroke, and the impending conflict with her makes me want to red the next installment. I had to give you less than a perfect rating because of several obvious typographical spelling errors, as Annon mentions before me. Usually, in my experience, this type of error originates from an author who edits his/her text alone without outside help. That should be easy to remedy in the future, if you can find a buddy to give your text a secondary proofread. Good luck!
dlurie
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Exceptional effort, I really enjoy the main characters...
Deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I can't wait for the next part!
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