The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Randomking
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Colors Part 1
A sex goddess gains a new follower who spreads her message through transformations.
Average Scores:
 Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Good
 Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
I already read all three Colors stories and I want more!! Out of the two storylines presented so far, I like the original one Slightly more, but Please keep adding to BOTH of them
 3pyon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Very Good Downloaded it back in 01
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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