The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

JB/NL
tsunami@xs4all.nl
Creed of Lust
A sidestory based on the world of "Earth is such a stupid name" set at about the start of the second story -- a few troopers want their fun, but they get into really, really big trouble. CAUTION: contains some pretty strong stuff.
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Anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Fucking waste of time to read. Too bad you can't give negative marks - this story deserves a -5 across the board. Yuck!

Splinter
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Don't rate it low just because it's not your thing. Not mine either, but it's still well-written.

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