Helpful comments and suggestions apprciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.94
- BE: 4.13
- Characters: 4.69
- Technical: 4.38
Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Holy fuck, I never thought I'd see another one. This story doesn't stop being good, but it could use an editor. I know it's probably a sort of bridge between the last part and whatever's coming next, but it could have used more BE too. Otherwise, it's still an excellent story.
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Another excellent chapter! The slight lack of BE is easily made up for with the brainwashing.
Hound
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I have been waiting and waiting for the next chapt. With anticipation. This story keeps getting better and better. Keep them coming
NiceOne!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
At long last, another installment! It almost feels like it's losing focus, but it's a great read. Keep them coming!
Chelseasboy
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Absolutely love the series, the lack of BE wasn't a big let down, as the story made up for it in other ways! Keep it up, this just is great.
ZenPaladin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Now that you have a hero. You have a story.
I am not a big fan of the girl being abused in stories but the description in this series is great.
The strugle between Dan and Ann and the Stranger is interesting. I will look forward to the next one.
Dark Eclypse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I absolutely love this story. I have to say your attention to the psychological aspect of what is happening to Ann is simply first class. I've been on the edge of my seat every since reading your first installment. Keep them coming.
pivokrtek
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like tihis plot and hope we don`t have to wait another 4 months for the next part.
I`m couriuos what happens when Ann changes her mind.
indeed
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
excelent as always, keep it up!
davebloke
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
One of the best BE stories around. Perhaps part 11 padded out with repetitive action a bit. Also, perhaps a less scrupulous doctor or another female could be introduced - story could get bogged down in the same house. Don't keep us waiting!
captain nice
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent story overall, this chapter was particularly good. The writing could use editing for errors, but otherwise the only problem I have with it is that, personally, I'd like to see someone more unscrupulous have power over her for a while.
Mithrandur
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
i like were this story is heading with the nc and mc themes coming more apparent in this chapter as in she is starting to be trained by all the videos and things the doctor is making her do and watch...im wondering/hoping that this doctor will turn her into a complete and total fuck toy...and this was his intention all along..keep up the good work
Biantai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
They should figure out a way to get her "reasonable" just to have her balloon up and get sexy all over again.
Zedd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm wondering and wondering when the next installment is going to get uploaded! I'm anxious, to say the least! I really enjoy your writing style! Keep it going, 'Stranger!'
bigjoo12
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great story ... really waiting for it to continue
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