crash99@online.ie
I've been away for awhile, but I'm back with a new one. This has been long in writing and I hope it is better than my previous works. This story is packed with cowgirls, genetic modification, slavery, freedom from cultural taboos, and of course, lots of sex and big breasts.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.11
- Characters: 4.56
- Technical: 4.44
Animus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please make a sequel! I really loved the story and I think there is potential for a really good series. Thanks!
kaaaanigit
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
a throughly enjoyable story, well thought out and structured so that those that also look for a more technical explanation should be more than satisfied. I look forward to another installment
air631
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful detail. I'd love to read a sequel with some guy-girl action concerning Sarah.
echo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Interesting concept and good execution. Keep it up.
Moolove
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Nice bit of invention. Liked the setting too. The space thing makes the changes more believable somehow - after all who knows what's really out there?
xxxecil
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
intriguing, but it might have been more exciting if you'd explored the heroines' mating lock with some men - since offworlders can reverse the virulence of the virus.
xopetotec
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
rydz
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely better than what you used to do, I can see lots of improvement. Also, you seem to have visualized a very interesting setting, vaguely reminiscent of Outlaw Star. I like this one a lot, more along these lines would be appreciated.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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