The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil by request
"Enter the Amazon" Book 1
 (Commissioned by special request by an interested fan.) Deep in the Amazon rainforest, only the smallest fraction of organisms have been studied. Here, there are strange species and biological secrets with powers as sinister as they are erotic. Lives will be transformed, breasts will blossom, and libidoes will explode! Will the fast-spreading invasion trigger an orgiastic end to human civilization? (Contact XXXecil with your own story wishes!)
Average Scores:

printer cartridges
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Good post! Found a lot of new and interesting! Will share the link with others:D

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Every time I come back here again and don`t get disappointed..!

Courier Company
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Thanks for the article! I hope the author does not mind if I use it for my course work!...

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

As I have expected, the writer blurted out..!

gratis casino bonus
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Thanks a lot! An extremely interesting comment!!...

Surfer Eyewear
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Uh, well, explain me a please, I am not quite in the subject, how can it be?!...

rent water slides
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

Somewhere in the Internet I have already read almost the same selection of information, but anyway thanks!!...

Shave Gel
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

The material is on the five plus. But there is a minus! My internet speed 56kb/sek. The page was loading for about 40 seconds!...

montreal photographer
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Scribbler, give me a student's record-book!)))

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

As always, this author delivers the goods. I have to say that perhaps more than other "introductory" chapters in other stories, this one really needs some follow up. It doesn't quite have enough to stand on its own two feet. That's the only reason for the modest Technical Quality score I gave - the writing style left too many things open-ended and plot hooks dangling. The next chapters will surely resolve this issue. Great work as usual.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent quality writing that is the hallmark of the author. The wide vocabulary used in the descriptions of the characters is always very welcome.
I gave a slightly lower score on the overall because it's a little short story development. I thought there were too many separate threads and consequently not enough "substance" in each. It reads far more like a trailer to get people interested than an actual story.

p.s. Xxxecil, if you're taking requests again, it would be great if you could write new episodes for your A.S.S. series. It's still my favourite one!

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
Your Nickname:

Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
1 2 3 4 5

BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
1 2 3 4 5

Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
1 2 3 4 5

Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
1 2 3 4 5

Your comments on the story: