Another chapter to Ann's worst nightmare. Those of you who don't like the series, nobody is forcing you to read it. The writer is not focusing on perfect english, but still appreciates some of the helpful comments. Keep them coming. For those who like the story, enjoy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 4.17
- Technical: 3.67
Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Jo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Whoever the people are who are claiming they don't like these stories are phillistines. Keep it up, this stuff is gold.
grotto
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story, but I just want some closure! The author uses deus ex machina to keep the heroine in her arousing predicament. All other characters refuse to help her. Although it is really hot, it makes me so mad! I begin to actually hope that a sympathetic soul would wish her back to her normal state.
Lord Kahn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love the saga!!
But please, more wishes!!
Great job!! keep it up!!!
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Good as always, but it's getting to be like watching Lost, with all of the cliffhangers! That's not to say I don't like teasing...
lanchoman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very good story, as always. Please keep writting and let some character wish something more :P
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this series... keep up the awesome writing. I don't mind the lack of wishing, it's really building up to it actually. But at some point some more wishes (even if they just worsen her situation) are going to need to happen. And I can't wait.
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Keep the series going, though i agree with the others- the suspense is killing me. Someone has got to believe her soon, for better or worse
mtb
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent story.. Love the character, love the scenario.. Would definitely love to see a shift in her predicament, though. There's been a lot of focus on the shrinking/growing wish as of late, and I'd love to see her interact with some other characters that build up her predicament further (for better or worse, or, preferably, both). Keep it going.. You've got gold here.
Hound
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Keep em commin I can't wait to see the next installment -- I check back everyday 2 or three times hoping a new one will be here -- Ann is a great character -- don't listen to the nay sayers
Cletus
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Mediocre English is ok, but the story lacks eroticism.
vermin
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Well, I have no comment on the story, as I'm unable to read the recent installments. They appear to be formatted only for MACs. Or am I just stupid?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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