The story was pretty good, but I don't like how this formula doesn't match up as much as the earlier entries. The original seemed originally the best -no pun intended- and later entries before this author's entries seemed to try a new formula rather than repeating it with minor elements added to it. From what I don't like in the new formula is #1) Janet's breasts isn't as big of a viewpoint as it was anymore. Even though her breasts does change the others to some extent, I don't like how in this and the other entries by this author revolves around her body, making others sex crazed because of her milk alone (well, that isn't as bad, but not as good either), and suddenly become a height multiplier. #2) There's a huge absence of "self-reaction" and control of her breasts. They're now just milk-filled gigantic breasts. Where's that inner force that her breasts used to have? There isn't really much BE except for the side characters in the latest entries. And even then it's not as good because it's a giantess thing. As in Lydia's breasts grow because she's getting bigger, basically. And next thing, I don't like how in the world these people are solely interested in being naughty all the time. In earlier entries persuasion was key yet in the latest ones they just comment on how she looks then they get into action. There's is too much lack of persuasion. And #3) Bad description in Janet's breasts. Why aren't there any description on how they react to from certain scenarios? For example: if Rick licks Janet's nipple, it doesn't describe how it becomes erect or anything like earlier entries. Description and detail is key, and that's missing in the latest entries.
Overall, I don't think this is bad, it's just not good -or as good- as earlier entries since the new formula was too... off.
I didn't really appreciate the sudden shift in Janet from a lean cockteasing machine into a clumsy fat person. While I will say your later chapters have improved from this one, this is by far the worst of the series. Like I said her cockteasing ablities disappear for pretty much all of ch 9 and 10, replaced with clumsily banging around while onlookers admire her. Also you REALLY need to mix up the adjectives, waddling is not a sexy word, especially when used over and over and over. Waddling is something my over-the-hill mom does because she has no cartilage in her knee, not something a fertility goddess does. also I was sad to see you removed an "ability explained in chapter 7 and implied in earlier chapters, for her breasts to react to situations in sexy ways: "Janet’s breasts often behaved as if they had a life of their own. Just as a man’s penis can express a range of moods through its color, texture, and movement, her breasts displayed a similar variety of contours and skin tones depending on Janet’s (or their) needs. At different times they might be soft and pillowy, firm and buoyant, or deeply tapered and dramatically wide-swept or even fully rounded and taut from their extreme fullness." I hope you re-touch on this if future chapters emerge, as it was really quite sexy. Lastly in this chapter (I didn't notice it in the later chapters) you spend way too much time on pointless crap that doesn't add to the story at all, like making rick a woodsmith all of a sudden just so you can explain some strange way that janet feeds her kids. That didn't really need to be explained at all, it could have just been stated "With the abundant increase in Janets bust, feedings became an incredible chore, but now on her second child, she has become an expert on managing her bust." also i'm glad there are no sexting scenes in later chapters, that was probably the low point of this chapter.
These new additions to the Janet's Milk saga are interesting...I'm not much of a BBW fan and was really more interested in the changes the other females were going through. Yet we saw relatively little of them. But the casting was great and the technical quality was good, so I'll lay aside my personal preferences and give these additions a good score in those areas. I'd love to see more work by this author. Thanks for contributing.