The Overflowing Bra

However, the author created a cool thing..!

Greatest

It's been a long wait, and well worth it. No really useful suggestions to make, I just hope the next part comes soon :)

very good, like the others chapters. I hope the next one comes soon, this story was one of the main reasons I keep checking the updates almost every day ;P
I would suggest to dont get stuck with the shrinking thing it could get very repetitive.

This series is so good... please keep writing! I agree with the shrinking stuff, maybe it's time to throw something new into the mix? Either way keep up the amazing work, I look forward to the next installment!

You and Chimerian are my favorite authors.
Would love to RP in the BE genre sometime.
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Love the series... just wish there was more wishing, you know?

Nice typo of Worste. For a second, I was wondering if the story involved lederhosen.
P.S. my worst nightmare is that this boring series won't end. I've read more interesting phone books. Take up another hobby, like knitting.

I mostly enjoy reading this series, but I would like to see the protagonist interact with other people a little more.  Your story is in danger of becoming stagnant.  It might also pay to have a fan, or even a critic, check over your work via the forums before posting a finished effort.  Some misused words in there which looked like typos not picked up by a spellchecker

I love slow shrinking, few stories include it AND BE. Keep up the good work!

Great series so far. I just hope I'm not the only one who suddenly finds the protagonist finds herself a bit...larger than life, so to speak? Has a chance to....look down on others?
Ah, you get the idea, it's just that growth happens to be a favourite of mine :D continue as you see fit.

I'll agree with Daunte and Anne, above- you need someone for the main to interact with (otherwise it's just her say "Oh noes!" over and over again) and a proofreader would help a lot. I have a sneaking suspicion you're using a voice-to-text of some kind to write this, based on some of the errors I've noticed, but maybe that's just my imagination.
As far as the story goes, the BE itself is great. It's nice to see something a little slower than the tits-in-five-seconds usual (which is fine in its own way, but...). You're developing her fairly well, but it falls back to needing someone to interact with to get any real interest in her going. Showing is better than saying, as the rule goes.
This is a little more of a suggestion than anything else- tell the readers what to expect, to a degree. It's fine that Ann doesn't know what is going to happen, but by telling us and leaving her in the dark, you build tension (viz: horror movies, cutscenes with the villian's evil plan, etc). It's something to consider.
Finally, I'll agree and reccommend you continue moving past the shrinking thing. If it's just a whim- that's fine, we've had had chapters enough. Show us what other wacky things people can do to her. If it's something you really like and want to keep... well, I suppose that's fine, too. Your story and all.
Anyways, I've enjoyed reading and here's to hoping you continue the series to whatever conclusion you have in mind.

Great job, keep it up! I have to agree with the rest of the reviewers on a few things, though. Maybe move past the shrinking for a while, and have her interact with people more. It's always fun to see how they can affect her situation, as shown in 4 and 5 with Billy. But, it's your work. I just hope you continue doing this. ^^

Thanks for a new chapter in this great series, but you should leave the shrinking stuff alone for a while, it's getting repetitive, and as somebody have said, add new characters that make wishes (like the 2 guys from the end of the chapter). Everything else is awesom. Keep up this great work!

I liked your creativity, keep it coming for the next chapter

I really like the way you Described her when she was drinking water to grow again, Not many stories i know of have that, but it rocks :D