tsunami@xs4all.nl
Yes, but why is it such a stupid name ?
Read and find out ...
Complete with *BONUS* sidestory!!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
GenericName
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Great character descriptions for the most part; however, there were several gramattical errors throughout that lower the score slightly. BE was spread out but done well enough. Overall, very nice, just work on your grammatical skills and you'll be set.
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Tons of interesting sex, but I have a hard time imagining glowing people. It feels like the first half of an interesting book too.
poco
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good story. Very imaginative.
ntsly
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Personally, while not usually interested in alien sex, I found this story delightful. I thought the situations and the characters believable enough to cast the spell for me. The spell that lets me fall into the story. Hell, I dreamt of it throughout the night after I finished it, and they were really, REALLY good dreams! Plus I just really liked your characters, and the sidestory got me all amped up for more....I don't know if you had more planned for this storyline, but I can hope :)......I gave it 5's across the board, but knocked the technical for the previously mentioned grammatical errors, but pumped it back up on the basis of style, which I loved....Thanks alot!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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