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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil's: The Siege; Book 3!
 Lies and conspiracies come to light as the salacious secret of the sex-plague is revealed! Todd faces his worst fear, as a host of hotties take pussy-pleasing advantage of his moment of weakness! Yet all hope is not lost; as Todd manages to turn the tables on the alien force behind the bulging boobs and explosive estrus! He finds himself surrounding by willing, wanton, whores desperate for  his cock, and yet manages to pave the way for a new, lustful age! Read book 3 of the Siege for answers to the questions burning in each crotch.
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Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I truly enjoyed this.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Of all that you've written, I've enjoyed this series the most. Could be interesting to see where else you're going with this if you dod write some more.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very enjoyable, I really liked this story.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Sorry, my opinions are quite different from the previous two. I think this is one of your series which I have enjoyed the least. You character descriptions and writing quality are excellent as usual. However, the ending was a bit of an anticlimax (no pun intended). The build-up (the first 2 parts) were good but in the end, all that happened was that we discover that Todd didn't change into a woman. Even the process where he discovers this (this 3rd part) wasn't very eventful.

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

I am sorry usuaslly I love your stories this time however I was slightly disappointed.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I must say, it didn't really grab me as your other stories have. I suspect that it isn't finished yet, as a series, and would really like to read the ending (hoping one is forthcoming) before giving a final verdict. Technical quality was excellent as usual, and your characters are grounded and believable, if sometimes slightly twisted :) This time though, the BE didn't seem to take centre stage. While probably deliberate on your part, it's what lessened the enjoyment of the story for me. There was none of the normal description of the sensuality/sexual awakening/plain enjoyment of the process from the women's perspective as you often write. The sort of frenzied mindless sex only keeps my attention for one scene :( I do think that could just be me, however :)

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As per the usual, great quality here in terms of writing style and character buildup, but the BE was low in quanity and overall detail. Other than that, another good story.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Your best yet.

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