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The Overflowing Bra

Hot Summer Tales Part 3: Highway to Hell
Yes, it's here! The never-awaited part 3 to the HST series!
More of Marvin's misadventures as he finds himself in some really uh ... BIG ... trouble. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2


A happy reader
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A thrilling climax to this 3 part story. Although I wish so badly for a #4, I think that Part 3 concludes this series very succinctly. Throughout the three stories the two main characters are very engrossing. The inter-play between Desdemona an Marvin was very well written and the dialogue flowed very realistically (suspension of disbelief aside; it is a story about a succubus after all,) Would that more writers could as easily create characters as engaging.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

your best story of the series yet!!! please continue!!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As the previous stories, this was a fun romp to read.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great story! I've always loved the demonic aspect in BE stories. After finishing the third part I want to know what adventures Marv and Desiree/Desdemona have next! Write More!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Really good writing style; glad to see you continued on with the story, and a nice 'twist' to the character development.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story is unique in it's style and theme. I enjoy this story line mostly because the plot is unpredictable and exciting (rare these days). Characters, technical quality and enjoyment all receive high marks, but the BE gets 4 out of 5, perhaps because that is not the chief focus of this story.

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