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Faeophobia: Curse of the Forest Nymph
 Official Prequel to a story to be posted July 29th in the B.E. Storyclub! What sexual secret rules the life of Janet Hardwicke? Why does she plot vengeance against Professor Lily of Madison University? Does it have anything to do with her extraordinary, expanding breasts? Read Curse of the Forest Nymph, subscribe to the B.E. Story Club, and then get the whole truth by reading 'Sweet Revenge', to be released July 29th.
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

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Ali bin fukkingoats
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

For the love of Allah, please let this crappy series die.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

As always, a fun little tale. The "reveal" on what the main character wants the potion to do is entertaining, and unique, but needed to be punchier. We got teased with it long enough that in order for us to get a real sense of payoff we need to have it be BAM, short and sweet, so that we can go back and re-absorb the story in view of what we now know. The main character (only character?) is great, you really get a sense for her thought process in this vignette. For vignettes like this in a "continued universe", the author should come up with a brief, 2-3 sentence blurb about the universe "up front", so that new people to the series always get some background. Great job.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Well written and pleasant. A little hard to follow at times, but a good read. Xxxecil is an accomplished writer and I was expecting a little bit better of a read.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5


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