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Hell's Housewife: Book 1
Mrs. Sarah Evans Cox is an unassuming, flat-chested, prudish housewife that leads a dangerous, awesome, magical double-life of ballooning boobs, toe-curling sex, and.....alien invasions? Book 1 of a dark and disturbing epic.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Excellent story!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Look forward to the rest

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm giving one rating for all 3 parts. The quality of writing and the descriptions of the female form are excellent as usual. I've read fantasy/horror themed stories and sci-fi themed stories, but the combination of both in this way is novel (pun intended!).

some guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

XXXecil, your best yet. Great BE, solid story. The main character was well-rendered, but no other characters received much in the way of development -- my only quibble.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Its a good read, well written as usual. I really like the part as the demon/housewife. Unlike Faephobia, This series had an ending.

The alien thing purple tentacle thing was a little icky.

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