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Hell's Housewife: Book 1
(Contest Entry) Mrs. Cox, unassuming, prudish housewife leads a dangerous, secret double life of ballooning boobs, supernatural sex, and alien invasions? A dark and disturbing epic in three parts. 
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Love the duplicity of Sarah's nature. She lives at both extremes of the sexual spectrum. Good job!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

As with all of XXXecil's works, this kept me riveted from beginning to end through all three tales. The way he creates the characters and gives them relatively relatable quirks and characteristics is profoundly genius. So nice to find an author who doesn't just write sex stories to be writing them. He actually develops a plot, plot twists, humanizing qualities for his characters, and so many other things that are lacking in so many sex stories today. Keep it up, XXXecil. Your brand of writing will never go out of style.

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