The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Precious Pleasure
Danto is a criminal, Samantha a great hero. Will the two of them hate each other, or will something more meaningful 'grow' between them and make things interesting?
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I think this was the first BE story I've read that had foreshadowing. Please keep up the good work.

Some notes: I wasn't entirely clear on whether Purity was a planet of prudes. The name and the juxtaposition of giving up sex/the obscene spaceship initially made me think that you were playing these people for laughs, but I had an altogether different impression of them, or at least of Sam, by the end.

The story sort of had that warm and fuzzy feeling to it, and I am assuming that you went in this direction due to the feedback on your previous story. IMO, this was a nice change, but for an "erotic" story, maybe the "middle path" would be more appropriate?

Whatever. Please keep writing. It's so much harder to create than to criticize.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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