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Jennifer discovers some very useful bust-enhancing lotion and shares with a friend. See what happens to them and how they will conceal their massive boobs in middle school. Part 1.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.13
- Technical: 4.38
The boob guy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
we need part 2,3 and 4 soon pal!
poi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
aaaaaa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cards344
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
nobody else
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
If there is more to this story, it could be really good as long as young girls are edited out. It needs more description.
R
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Boobage
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
WE DEMAND MORE, MORE I SAY
be lover
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
i luved the story but where is pt. 2
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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