The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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emericaskater10@yahoo.com
Melons
Jennifer discovers some very useful bust-enhancing lotion and shares with a friend. See what happens to them and how they will conceal their massive boobs in middle school. Part 1.
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The boob guy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

we need part 2,3 and 4 soon pal!

poi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

MORE!!

aaaaaa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

can't wait for part 2

Cards344
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I cannot wait for more

nobody else
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

If there is more to this story, it could be really good as long as young girls are edited out. It needs more description.

R
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Great

Boobage
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

WE DEMAND MORE, MORE I SAY

be lover
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

i luved the story but where is pt. 2

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