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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
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The Ten-Inch Journey; Step One
 A slightly new direction. A different and perverted tale of the aftermath of a salacious, sexual apocalypse. Who is the mysterious, desert wanderer? Why is he being chased by nubile, half-naked hotties who can't seem to stop their breasts from growing? And why is he running away?
Average Scores:

srmreader
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Ten inch rescues a pre breeder (14-18 years and 7.5 inches)
from a tribe of big bbusty huntress.
The tribes women has been able to control the pre breeder by
exploiting his fear of big breasted woman.
Upon his rescue the pre beeder joins Ten incher quest to restore the world to the days prior to the mutation and female
dominance. But not without encounters captures and escapes from
the huntress who are determined to bring them to there tribes for their prized purposes.

srmorb
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

This story has 4.5 rating for sequel potential, The use of breast
communication and the application of primal subliminal means for male entrapment brought a totally original and creative approach to
the female dominance theme.
Continuation of this series is an absolute must.

needle dick, the bug fucker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Well, at least it was different. And someone knew how to find a spell checker.

P.S. I have really low self esteem and an even smaller dick, so don't disagree with me, or I'll have to vote to cancel you out.

Nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A really interesting start...although I normally like this author's fuckfests quite a lot, this one's got a creative setup. And the "breast-talking" code was HI-LARIOUS to imagine. Well done.

deux_anges
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really liked your original style so this departure didn't quite hit the spot so the overall enjoyment was lower. However, it's set up the background story nicely and the technical quality is excellent as usual.

Horseradish
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Well written, easy to follow and very creative. Not the most erotic story I've seen from this author. Breast talk was pretty funny.

rtpoe
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Not your ordinary BE story. Interesting background. Can't wait for more!

Anon#4067
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great sci fi story. I'd love to see more done with this.

Bill Pratt
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Odd piece.

I'd give it a 4.5 on technical if I could.

PintoBean
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

An interesting start to a new series. Let's hope it doesn't wind up in the pay-per-view secion of BEArchive like the Faeophobia series...

Marauder
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely great story. Really loved the setting and the thought that obviously went into it.

MerkavaIV
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoy all of your stories, and it's good to see a new arc. I hope to see more from this one, as it's got a bit of a new twist to it.

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