dragon6860@yahoo.com
Sarah, a normal girl in high school, through a series of blunders, caused the wrath of the worst girl in the school, Sophia. With the help of some "Borrowed" nanotechnology, Sophia gets her large, inflated revenge. But Sarah is not out, and she'll get her revenge as well.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.60
- BE: 2.60
- Characters: 2.40
- Technical: 2.60
TheObvious
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
andrat2000
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Stretch
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I thought a bit more description of the charecter's personalities could have been used. Also, though the B.E. was huge, did it really qualify for a WOW rating? Overall, the idea for the story was very creative and imaginative and I hope to see more from this writer.
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Not a bad story but you may want to watch which tense you are writing in. The story started in the past tense and then suddenly switched to the present tense in the fith paragraph. Other than that though it's a pretty good story, well done.
Doctor X
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It was a very nice Idea for a story, but it could use a little more description. Keep writing I'd love to see more from you.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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