A mean female lawyer makes a deal with the devil but falls into his trap. This is one of my earliest works that I went back and fixed up.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.14
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 2.71
- Technical: 3.29
rudeypunk
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This is not a story but a situation, an introduction to a much larger idea. Disapointing.
PoLyMoRf
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Needs a lot of work... Can't say much about what when one is 1/2 asleep, but it wasn't enthralling.
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Intersting introduction, I'll have to see the continuation before making a real decision
andrat2000
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Nice plot, but way to short. Unfortunatly incomplete.
sproutsumner
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It has a lot of promise. I also think it needs to be longer to tease out the possibilities. For example returning her to the real world. What would the devil do to her there? It is a difficult one to rate because the length is the only real down side. The idea is superb. Thankyou for sharing it. I hope you add more.
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A nice idea with lots of possibility, needs more to it though.
zcon_disk
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Excellent beginning to an interesting story, but too abrupt and underwritten as is. I would be deeply interested to read, though, if you ever felt the urge to, ah... "flesh it out" a bit. So to speak.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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