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The Overflowing Bra

Benji Dude
Master PC: Self Mutilation
Stephanie gets a copy of Master PC, being sensible she starts off with small changes but as time goes by the program slowly corrupts her until she doesn’t care what happens… or does she?  Features a cameo appearance by Susan from Spells ‘R’ Us: Magical Strap On.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

creepy, i dont know what you're on but this stuff at the end isn't right. it was a great story till the last part. next time exclude all that alien transformation crap. and also keep her WHITE! latino chicks arent even hott. get off your drugs and write a sensible story.


Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed this story, I hope to see more from yah.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I think for a lot of people it is a enjoyable story. Unfortunatly I'm not a fan of at will changes and thus of the master PC program.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good story, for the most part. I enjoyed the transformations and the herms. I thought there was a little too much masterbation and at the end I thought the story was finally getting started when it time jumped to the epilogs. It would be nice to see some more chapters between the end of this story and it's epilogs. Slavery isn't a turn on for me, but I feel it was done tastefully. My last comment is, why would you make yourself bisexual unless you already are? That bugged me.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Kind of a sad ending, I would have liked at least one of them to come out of it ok. I liked the story, though there were some gramatical mistakes. I look forward to more stories from you.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

One of your better written stories, however the characters didn't seem very realistic. The women acted the way a man would want them to, not the way women normally act. While there were some grammatical issues, they weren't as bad as in some of your previous stories. The epilogues really ruined the feel of the story, it would have been better if they hadn't been tacked on and left it open for a sequel.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You'll fond my rating a bit too high but this story really got me dreamin'

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