crash99@online.ie
Sorry its been so long, but the show must go on. This episode delves deeper into the history of Dodson and introduces some unforgetable characters.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 2.75
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.50
DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Much better than your previous stories, this one was fairly interesting, but still need work on your breast growth details.
basil_jell
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Much beter. Until now I've enjoyed the spin off more then the original but you are starting to catchup.
The story seems to be finding its way.
Hell-Scythe
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I have been waiting to see where you were going to take the story next. I really like this chapter. I am a little curious about the line "could do magic with licking pussy". It would be nice if you could go into this topic some more next chapter. All and all, a great chapter.
Mr_Nuclear
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Keep writing! It gets better every time.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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