Alicia begins growing when she eats and works out. but her growth has more to do with it than that...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.42
- Characters: 2.83
- Technical: 2.50
Neas
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well it was ok I'd like to see more but try to describe the bust size even more than already had.
Joey
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
File needs to be formatted better to be even legible.
George Bush
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's a Microsoft Works File. Should have converted it to something more universal.
The Mann
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Im workin on a story just like this, what should I do, I dont wanna step on anyones toes.
nickname
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Isn't this an older story called "think mega"? I know I have read this before under a different author, but I don't remember who. Don't worry about having a similar story, especially if this is ripped-off. It's a great story, but I've seen it before.
Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not the best story ever, but ok.
Bejabbers
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Looks like the author was going for something a bit more spiritual...
WTF?
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
If your gonna rip somoeone's story off at least take their name off the title...
Vincent
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I really enjoyed this. Well specifically the part where Alicia was benching and grew with every rep. I really like that type of growth. I read the original but it was about a woman getting fat...not my bag. Nice adaptation.
brit
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I've always been a fan of big, tall and growing girls. I especially like it when the girl grows to huge yet within-the-realm-of-possiblity sizes, which is what most of this story was all about. Big kudos for that. Not the best BE persay, but great as a growth story (and a rare approach at that)
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Not a bad story but not a great one either, some gramma mistakes let it down, along with the writer getting carried away at the end.
The Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
For awhile, I couldn't even find the story to rate it, 'casue apparently it was written by someone else(?) It was interesting, a bit of a downer at the end because the chracters DIE, and frankly I almost felt a little guilty for enjoying it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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