The 4th Chapter in this spinoff series. Victor, the morning after and Nancy plots her revenge.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.89
- Technical: 3.67
benji_dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good story, I'm not too sure about the present tense for the story but that's just me, personally I prefer a past tense. Keep 'em coming!
Basil_jelly
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Never liked the "revenge of the nerds" style plot, and no cindy stuffing this time.
hawk2206
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Part4 is the best so far. I want to read more like this. ;)
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The writing is much, much better, and this was easily the best of the series so far. Keep it up!
MrNuclear
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Technically written better, but still could use some work, overall a very good read however.
Grey Deth
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really liked this story. You delved a bit more into characters and really ratcheted up the stories potential ALOT! The transformations are quite sexual and so varied that there is almost something to like for everyone. Please continue!
P.s. The more detail..the better!
some guy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
very nice, the whole series is great, and work on the spelling.
loved it
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely marvelous one of the best stories I have ever read
please continue
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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